Wandering in the streets;
In search of you;
Thoughts of fear overpowering
Hundreds of memories;
Overflowing with tears my eyes;
Unable to bear the pain;
Trembling and shivering all the way;
Young are the thoughts still
Orbiting around me;
Undying will be my LOVE for you.
In search of you;
Thoughts of fear overpowering
Hundreds of memories;
Overflowing with tears my eyes;
Unable to bear the pain;
Trembling and shivering all the way;
Young are the thoughts still
Orbiting around me;
Undying will be my LOVE for you.
Fantastic Maddy! :)
ReplyDeleteEmotions well penned... :) Loved the intensity! :)
thanx aarthi!!i thot nobdy wud even read it!!m jus very new to the world of poetry!!
ReplyDeleteHey, people will surely read you... but if you don't mind, can I say something? You should visit a few blogs and leave your comments there, that might get you some visitors! :) No offense meant though... :D
ReplyDeleteAnd the new template is good! :)
ReplyDeletei nva knew!!!!!!!U CAN WRITE!!!!!!!!!!AMaZIN man!!!!n hey....der's no mention of me in ur ne of ur blogs...:-(
ReplyDeleteIs it 'wandering' or did u mean wondering purposefuly !!! ???
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ReplyDelete@arthi!!sure aarthi will read other blogs!!thanx..
ReplyDelete@ raj...
ReplyDeletewait for the next blog dear!!!it will b dedicated to you!!
@shafi..thanx its wanderin nly..sorry spelling mistake!!
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